Buckkeep stables - Revision history

Voici: corrected ambiguous phrasing

2006-05-03T13:48:49Z

corrected ambiguous phrasing

2006-04-28T14:35:44Z

2006-04-27T15:24:36Z

2006-04-21T19:14:10Z

rephrased & added content

2006-04-08T01:07:21Z

2006-04-08T00:45:55Z

2006-04-08T00:34:31Z

2006-04-08T00:33:07Z

New page

[[Category:Places]]
[[Category:Buckkeep]]

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 In Fitz childhood, the stables were mastered by [[Burrich]] who lived in an upstairs room above the stalls, keeping a strict rein on the stable running.
-After the [[Red Ship War]] the Buckkeep stables saw large developments, causing [[Hands]] to move the main stables to a new, larger site and the old stables from Fitz's childhood to become derelict and abandoned.
+After the [[Red Ship War]] the Buckkeep stables saw large developments, causing [[Hands]] to move the main stables to a new, larger site and the old stables from Fitz's childhood to become abandoned by the nobility, thus causing it to become derelict compared to it's former glory.
 Dog-boys and stable hands:

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 In Fitz childhood, the stables were mastered by [[Burrich]] who lived in an upstairs room above the stalls, keeping a strict rein on the stable running.
-After the [[Red Ship Wars]] the Buckkeep stables saw large developments, causing [[Hands]] to move the main stables to a new, larger site and the old stables from Fitz's childhood to become derelict and abandoned.
+After the [[Red Ship War]] the Buckkeep stables saw large developments, causing [[Hands]] to move the main stables to a new, larger site and the old stables from Fitz's childhood to become derelict and abandoned.
 Dog-boys and stable hands:

← Older revision		Revision as of 19:14, 21 April 2006
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−	The ~~stables~~ at [[Buckkeep]] ~~that~~ house not only horses but also hounds and hawks, ~~all~~ mastered by [[Burrich]] who ~~lives~~ in an upstairs room above the stalls.	+	The Stables at [[Buckkeep]] house not only horses but also hounds and hawks.
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		+	In Fitz childhood, the stables were mastered by [[Burrich]] who lived in an upstairs room above the stalls, keeping a strict rein on the stable running.
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		+	After the [[Red Ship Wars]] the Buckkeep stables saw large developments, causing [[Hands]] to move the main stables to a new, larger site and the old stables from Fitz's childhood to become derelict and abandoned.

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-The stables at the [[Buckkeep]] that house not only horses but also hounds and hawks, all mastered by [[Burrich]].
+The stables at [[Buckkeep]] that house not only horses but also hounds and hawks, all mastered by [[Burrich]] who lives in an upstairs room above the stalls.
 [[Category:Places]]
 [[Category:Buckkeep]]

← Older revision		Revision as of 00:34, 8 April 2006
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		+	The stables at the Buckkeep castle that housed not only horses but also hounds and hawks, all mastered by [[Burrich]].
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	[[Category:Places]]		[[Category:Places]]
	[[Category:Buckkeep]]		[[Category:Buckkeep]]